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Alvar Hanso

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Haiku Poems
« on: April 08, 2009, 09:01:10 pm »
Simple. Write haikus.
When you are done, please post them.
Here's a few of mine:

"On the subject of electronic sounds..."

The startup music
Its static blasts my eardrums.
The update fixed this.

"Raven Quoth nevermore The"

Lore a forgotten
lifted be Nevermore Shall
Dreary midnight once

If anyone doesn't know, Haikus are an ancient japanese form of poetry which need not rhyme, and always follow a strict syllable pattern. 5-7-5.

I look forward to hearing several witty/symbolic/random haikus from everyone!
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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 12:50:01 pm »
Longing in the night
A lonely tree sheds a leaf
Wishing it were whole
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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #2 on: April 10, 2009, 02:31:56 pm »
Audiosurfing
Let me pick up some yellows
But also some reds


Is that ok?
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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2009, 02:48:11 pm »
Haikus are awesome
But sometimes they don't make sense
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Green = listening, red = surfing

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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2009, 04:18:25 am »
Haikus are awesome
But sometimes they don't make sense
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Whehe :D That one made me roflmaool

Bananas and stuff
Lets throw them through the window
Coz' I don't like them
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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2009, 09:08:06 am »
As dusk approaches
The peasants and the knights weep.
Trogdor is coming.

(Not my favorite character, but a popular one nonetheless)
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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2009, 10:52:42 am »
One two three four five
Six seven eight nine, Oh yeah
ten eleven twelve

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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #7 on: April 13, 2009, 11:14:07 am »
Haikus are awesome
But sometimes they don't make sense
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MADE OF WIN LOL

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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #8 on: April 13, 2009, 02:44:38 pm »
Haikus are awesome
But sometimes they don't make sense
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old.  Why not write your own?
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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2009, 02:59:11 pm »
Haikus are awesome
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old.  Why not write your own?

Because I can't. I suck.

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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #10 on: April 14, 2009, 08:46:21 am »
In the great mansion
An ebony clock strikes twelve
Darkness and decay

(Depressing, eh?)
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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #11 on: April 14, 2009, 08:49:05 am »
There once was a man
called Bob, who... oh shit, that's wrong
- that's a limerick!

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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #12 on: April 14, 2009, 09:25:48 am »
This line is scrollingThis one is italicised
And this one is small
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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #13 on: April 14, 2009, 12:18:43 pm »
I don't know what Haikus are
I won't bother googling
I will just write whatever comes to my mind...


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Re: Haiku Poems
« Reply #14 on: April 14, 2009, 03:15:45 pm »
Haikus are awesome
But sometimes they don't make sense
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old.  Why not write your own?

Because I can't. I suck.


I am the lava
I can't write Haiku poems
I just suck too much

there!  :)
Quote from: Dick Masterson
The Apollo 11 mission was mankind walking to the edge of the Earth and telling the universe to go fuck itself. We go where we please, when we please.